Asked him with a martial arts of editing, to write a break both secular ethics, but also includes many years of resentment and hatred between sects rivers and lakes, while others Xinxuan plot also buckle, a great desire and call to such a bloody mini-novels .
novel requirements:
1, to involve three major sects
2, to include rivers and lakes between the years of martial pains and sorrows, but also to break the secular ethic.
3, while the circumstances have to buckle one Xinxuan, great bloody want to come and call. It is extremely looking forward to the sequel to the novel, while leaving n more suspense.
4, the shorter the better
the first 2 days, someone to contributors, the text is only ten words:
Tulv, dare with Pindao rob Shi Tai!
editing complex words: love and hatred, bloody indeed, and the dapper, n more suspense, but more than chivalrous, tender enough. Although the lakes and children, but there are tenderness million.
day 3, revised:
Shi Tai, do you give up Tulv Pindao from the bar!
editing and words: rivers and lakes children, tender filling, full of pathos. But still rigidly stick to the secular ethic.
day 4, the third draft:
Shi Tai, do you dare with Pindao rob Tulv!
editor think twice, Words: break for secular ethics, The desire to appeal to the bloody, exciting, suspense n more, but less is always something. . .
day 5, the end of draft:
monk: rob Shi Tai! Difficult to sort out the many years of martial both scores, a great desire and call to the bloody situation; there are disputes of My Darling Clementine, only to break the secular ethics, and filling the rivers and lakes Haoqiganyun children sloppy. Masterpieces system!!
Third, the power of the enhanced version:
the depths of the palace chambers,
Time for memory;, two men and a woman, three figures jumping up and down, then jumped into an open space among the same time. Man hand whisk, stare scolded: husband and wife can not do, why should you Kukuxiangbi it! one step forward and murmured: , flashed a beautiful dress boy, complained: , then lowered his head. hand whisk men hear, Dai Li a long while, sadly and said: Good, good, good, really Heaven cycle, cause and effect is not
cool, when I won your wife, now the meat you grab my heart , in vain I brandished a knife and degeneration, Joe was the officer, by then suffering from the palace. Monk seemed not to hear the words of priests, but wondering what was going to ask the woman: daughter, you that the emperor was nine years ago with his father out of
? He is now alive or dead? sound, a lama from heaven tattered clothes, imperial palace palace
deep, two men and a woman, three figures jumping up and down, then jumped into an open space among the same time. Man hand whisk,
饭局里不可不学的潜规则细节, stare scolded: husband and wife can not do, why should you Kukuxiangbi it! one step forward and murmured: -
Interpretation: this section is a great amount of information, you can simply come to the following one, is the rival priests and monks, both in love with Shi Tai; Second, the priests and Shi Tai are brother and sister; III Monk Shi Tai is the father and daughter; four, then robbed
Taoist monk wife. These are simple inference, literal understanding is not difficult to draw, but we have the second and third combined, monks and priests can be drawn is between father and son, while his wife is the monk and Taoist priest
Shi Tai's mother, then grabbed the hands of priests from the father, mother, so now is the monk hate him, and now the priest fell in love with his sister Shi Tai, Shi Tai just happens to be in love with his father monk.
see only two beloved to death juxtaposition,
air force ones, the woman reluctantly sighed: also. My body belongs to him, you go ... Long Yang has had the good monk Grandpa ... Well, sure enough Heaven circulation, cause hell, when I won your wife, now the meat you grab my heart, I brandished a knife and degeneration in vain, Joe was the officer, by then suffering from the palace.
Monk seemed to hear the priest's words did not, but pondered the question woman: daughter, you that the emperor is out of nine years ago with his father? He is now alive or dead?
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Interpretation: With the preceding analysis, this section is not difficult to understand, although currently in love with a monk Shi Tai father, but in a few years ago, but with his grandfather (also a priest's grandfather) Monk's father is a drift along the line of
things, the results gave birth to LeBron, and LeBron is the arm, Valentine's grandfather is a monk (monk grandfather said it should be precise), but he cast a glance from the Taoist view that a small relationship between the emperor and Taoist uncle also unusual, but the presence of a monk because of fear of
not declared their jealousy of the mouth fills only ogle, and priests of the heart the mouth of the meat,
nike air force one 25th, the surface To Shitai, in fact, actually refers to is the little emperor, and the presence of people can understand the true meaning of those words, only priests and small
emperor. This understanding is also what corresponds to the priests for the government to court and from the palace, in fact, to the little emperor, not to Shitai! As for the novel at the beginning of the fighting monks and priests, of them I think that is provoked
monk to report hate that year with his wife,
nike air force, and Taoist monks and their rush Shitai blame mostly because of his own palace and Yu Shi Tai still hung to cover themselves with a small arm of the emperor the truth.
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Interpretation: At this time the result has been pretty clear, the lamas and monks are father and son relationship, and then snatch a Lama monk's wife is his mother.
is not the final outcome of the above, if the above results are correct, the dialogue that the novel has never been there two characters, one is the monk's wife, the wife of one Lama can never gave up the ghost in this article dialogue involving all those who in fact played a
thing,
急事慢慢说，大事想清楚再说! ! ! The end result is - that is, the monk Shi Tai's wife, the mouth is the mouth of the wife Lama! ! ! The complete analysis is as follows:
priests and a monk Shi Tai children, Shi Tai and monks LL (priests and Shitai woman gave birth to the dialogue did not touch, that the wife is not a monk Shi Tai's mouth mother, but Shitai I), while monks and lamas
son and granddaughter both Lama and Shitai LL (the mouth of the wife is Shitai Lama himself, rather than the monk's mother), while the priests and Shitai and siblings LL (priest's wife is also a Shitai my mouth),
air force one low, the
to Lama, monks, priests three generations the same time a woman as a wife, so there are priests and monks each thought the other took away his wife, Lama, the monk took away his wife that such a result. LL Lama and Shitai
granddaughter gave birth to LeBron,
air force one shoes, priests have not been Shitai, so in love with the little emperor, so do not hesitate to enter the palace eunuchs (Taoist 0, LeBron 1, so it is not from the palace priests affect relations between the two) to close small Wong
emperor, the emperor at the same time can be small and a good friend the monk, from the lions flashed, the recognition of the relationship with the monks, but do not want to open relations with the priests, so two people with the lingo dialogue, to disclose information to the reader.
Note: this article is luanlun LL shorthand
V. Edition:
version of a love triangle: a thief Road! Seoul dare old monk rob Shi Tai.
version 2 arm Mountain: Nepal thief, you dare to grab Abbot Road God!
version 3 has an affair Brokeback Mountain: Tulv, you dare to grab Road Pinni God!
faithful to the Brokeback Mountain version 4: dead Nigerian thief. mo old monk and the Road to undermine the relationship between God,
air force 1 low shoes!
version 5 door soon fell in love with: Brother, you old monk, right from the gods are law
version 6: Nepal thief! dared to grab with the Tao Ye Father!!
version 7 plot coherence: Shi Tai, you're right ... ... from the old monk Shi Tai, you'll spare the old monk, right ~ ~
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